Friday, May 14, 2010

First short storyline

Nothing could stop this moment...


15 comments:

  1. Nothing could stop this moment; the lusty wind crinkled my hair while my heart beat soundly in my chest. The doleful tears couldn't stop from cascading down my cheeks... I knew it was over before it had begun, but the stultifying feelings I had feared all along was enough to slice my soul in half.

    (My DeviantArt account is Shelby Hoving :-))

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  2. Nothing could stop this moment of absolute and utter suspense that hung in the air around us. Not my mother who disapproved or father who thought I could have done better or even my best friend who was jealous of the certainty of the moment between us, because once our I do's were said like the forbidden fruit that held promise and commitment that bound us together like unmoving barbed wire coiled tightly around our souls, knowing that once our frozen lips touched each other and shattered our walls of secrecy, our new life would bloom from our thawing spirits and it would be damningly beautiful.

    (My DeviantArt account is Diana-Kisa) 8D

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  3. Nothing could stop this moment, as I spread my arms and learn how to soar without wings.
    But no one ever told me that flying was just the same as falling...

    (My deviantART account is HighQueenRachy)

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  4. Nothing could stop this moment as time is intangable. But how can a person relish the moment when it is gone before you know it. I want this feeling to last forever. Nothing could stop this moment, but I really wish they could.

    (My dA username is scaramoushe)

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  5. Nothing could stop this moment, the moment of flowers, sky, and bliss. Then sound ceased, colors vanished, and all I could feel was the cold and a bullet wound.

    (Ceata88 on Deviantart)

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  6. Nothing could stop this moment. She didn't dare to breathe until he replied, barely above a whisper. "I love you, too".

    Hope you like it :)

    (Stojke13 on deviantart as well)

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  7. PhoenixSparrow is my dA username.

    Nothing could stop this moment, except the button. He pushed it.

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  8. =PaperDart

    Nothing could stop this moment, Jonathon realised as he watched it force its way through the vaults of time. He grabbed his pocket-watch and started running as it began to unravel the third century.

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  9. Nothing could stop this moment, nothing could stop the tears or the laughter. It was like the end of all things, yet hope lingered on in our minds.

    (I'm chislarina on deviantArt)

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  10. Nothing could stop this moment. She was so perfect and I was just a stranger. So I took a picture and watched as she walked away for the last time.

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  11. Nothing could stop this moment...everyone watched in horror as the best man pulled out a gun and aimed in the direction of the bride...POP!--and then beautiful confetti of every colour rained down on her stunned face. 'I love you! May you be happy forever!', he shouted, with tears running down his smiling face.

    __darkn2ght in DA :) i always wondered how it should have ended :D

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  12. { just-a-web-artist on dA }

    Nothing could stop this moment... Nothing until her lips moved, and the words that came from her mouth had stabbed me; I remained silent, and quietly wished the moment lingered for just a tad longer.

    { ... that's two sentences right? Two sentences after the Nothing... Moment, right? -somewhat panicking- }

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  13. Nothing could stop this moment... Armageddon has arrived. As God looked down at the scorched earth far below him, tears fell from his half closed eyes as he felt the pain of the beings from the world below.

    (vkaod from deviantart)

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  14. Nothing could stop this moment..... believe me, I’d tried many times. I was back here again, desperately trying to find a way to change history but it always ended the same way; with a desperate look of terror in her eyes as her last breath escaped from her lips.

    (Leo-toes from deviantart)

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  15. Nothing could stop this moment, I thought as I swept his hair off his face and leaned forward to kiss him, closing my eyes. Of course I hadn't counted on my little sister and her friend bursting though the door at that exact second, their identical looks of shock quickly turning to fits of laughter.

    (Rovanna on Deviantart)

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